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217 lines
7.6 KiB
# story states:
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story state: 1
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lenore requesting water: 1
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lenore requesting potion for patient: 2
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patient requesting bomb for farm: 3
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witch turns us down: 4
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librarian gives explosives book: 5
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farmer prods to talk to witch again: 6
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witch turns aroundd: 7
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librarian gives gem book: 8
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witch unsatisfied: 9
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witch satisfied: 10
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fireworks festival: 11
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# larger ssscale:
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fireworks festival, father's recipes are gone? someone's recipes are gone? evereyone is preemptively sad that it won't happen
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gotta learn firewworks to make firewsorks for the festival
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charcoal seller is grumpy and doesn't believe it's ever going to happen
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# in depth:
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there are five people to talk to - lenore (hospital), hans (charcoal seller), stef (librarian), brigitte (farmer), agnes (witch)
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intro: hi! i'm phoebe! welcome to pilton! i would tell you about our fireworks festival, which was the pride of our town, but since my grandfather passed away after not being able to run it for a few years, it looks like it won't be happening anymore. everyone's broken up about it. it was really the pride of the town. i wish i could help but i barely know any alchemy - grandfather just kept all his knowledge in his head, and now i'm left without anything more than purifying water and picking herbs!
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(send letter to phoebe about needing pure water)
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(send letter to phoebe about charcoal)
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1.
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hospital:
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if not has water:
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lenore: hey phoebe. did you get my letter?
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if has water:
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lenore: thanks for the water. can you makee a potion for my patient neextdoor?
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(takes water)
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(gives reagent)
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(gives recipe)
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(goes to 2)
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charcoal seller:
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if not talk_charcoal_1
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hans: hey phoebe. if your family's not putting on the festival this year, you won't need the whole bulk order of charcoal, right? you can take as much as you want.
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(set talk_charcoal_1 true)
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(gives charcoal)
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if talk_charcoal_1
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hans: hey phoebe. charcoal's out back.
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(gives charcoal)
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farmer:
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door: you hear groaning from inside.
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librarian:
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stef: hey phoebe. looking for any book in particular?
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phoebe: just browsing today!
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witch:
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door: there is no answer to your knocking.
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2.
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hospital:
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lenore: you get that potion to my brigitte yet? she's got a red roof to the east of here.
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charcoal seller: as above
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farmer:
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if not has potion:
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door: you hear grooaning from inside.
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if has potion:
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brigitte: oof oww my back. thanks for healing it. do you know how to make bombs?
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phoebe: i'm sorry but no, my grandfather hadn't taught me when he passed, because they're dangerous.
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brigitte: i used to get them from the witch but she won't make them for me anymore. maybe you could ask her?
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(goes to 3)
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librarian:
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stef: hey phoebe. looking for any book in particular?
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phoebe: just browsing today!
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witch:
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door: there is no answer to your knocking.
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3.
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hospital:
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lenore: thanks for helping out my patient.
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charcoal sseller: as above
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farmer:
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brigitte: did she give you the recipe?
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phoebe: not yet!
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witch tower:
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agnes: this town is dead. i can make no more explosions becauses there is no more gifted alchemist in this town. phoebe dear, you're lovely but yoou're noot your grandfather. this town is a husk of what it once was. i am done teaching. if you want to learn alchemy, there's a library in the middle of town. i have no time for this.
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(goes to 4)
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4.
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hospital:
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lenore: wow, that witch is rude.
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charcoal seller:
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as abovoe
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farmer:
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brigitte:
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librarian: you say you're looking for a book about explosives? well, i don't have much but i found this in the reference area. maybe you can get something from it?
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phoebe: this is a chemistry manual but... black powder... yes, i think i could do this and... yes, i think i can use this to make gunpowder! maybe i can improvise this!
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(set flag got_chemistry_book)
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farmer:
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if not has gunpowder:
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farmer: any idea what to do about that boulder?
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if has gunpowder:
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(take gunpowder)
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farmer: hmm, yeah, i think if i poured this into the crack in the rock this would take it apart. did you convince the witch?
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phoebe: no, that old hag basically told me to fuck off! so rude!
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farmer: huh. i wonder what's up her bonnet.
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phoebe: she kept talking about how there's no great alchemy left in this town.
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farmer: maybe she needs someone to impress her.
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(goes to 5)
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5.
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hospital:
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lenore: hey phoebe. any aches today?
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phoebe: i'm in tip top shape!
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charcoal seller:
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as above
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witch:
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agnes: this town is dead. our greatest alchemists are lost. you are a baby. yoour grandfather never taught you his ways. your parents forsook the craft. there is nothing for it.
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phoebe: there's you! you could teach us!
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agnes: maybe if you showed any promise i would teach you. you have forgotten the ways of old.
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phoebe: grrrrr, you old hag! give me a test and i'll best it!!
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agnes: construct a starshine gem which carries red energy and shininess. then i might consider you to have potential.
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(goes to 6)
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6.
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hospital:
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lenore: hey phoebe. any aches today?
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phoebe: i'm in tip top shape!
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charcoal seller:
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as above
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librarian: yeah i think i do have some bookss about gems... let me check.
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librarian: here, does this help?
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phoebe: yes, this is perfect! hmm... hmmm... hmm... okay i think i need some raw crystal, polishing powder, and reagent. and it's got a recipe for the polishing powder! i should be able to gather sand at the beach... at the location...
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librarian: good luck!
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(set flag got_crystal_book)
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(take crystal)
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witch: hm. this is... passable. it's passable enough that I will give you the recipe. my bones are too tired to keep up this fight.
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phoebe: i'll show you up! i'll make the best fireworks festival!
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witch: hm. it'll suck.
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(door close)
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(give recipe)
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phoebe: okay. i can make this happen. charcoal seller was the one who set up the show, and i need to talk to lenore about safety!
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(goes to 7)
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7.
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A:
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charcoal seller: look, if you get me the fireworks, i can set up a show, but it'll need some space. maybe the farmer's field?
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farmer: suure! harvest is over so i'm not doing much with the field, and i'd love to repay you for getting rid of that boulder.
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charcoal seller: i'm all ready to go. when all the preparations are done, i'll meet you at the library.
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(goes to 8 if A and B)
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B:
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lenore: whoa, you can't just set off fireworks willy-nilly. get me 3 clean bandages and a distilled water. you can't do something as dangerous as fireworks without being prepared for injuries.
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phoebe: you got it!!
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lenore: thanks. this looks good. i'll meet you at the library when you're ready.
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(goes to 8 if A and B)
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librarian: i heard there's going to be a fireworks festival after all!
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farmer: i thought it was done for since the old alchemist passed away, rest his soul.
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charcoal seller: well it looks like phoebe took up the reins!
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phoebe: aw shucks!
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lenore: thanks for making this happen, phoebs.
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farmer: thanks, phoebe!
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charcoal seller: thanks, phoebe.
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phoebe: thank you all for helping out so much. i couldn't have done it without you.
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phoebe: and thank you for playing my game!
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(goes to 9)
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9.
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atelier door: thank you for completing atelier phoebe! this was a labor of love and bafflement. why did i make an atelier fangame in pico-8? i couldn't tell you. but i hope you enjoyed it! you can find me online as shoofle in most places, most frequently @shoofle@beach.city. gimme a shout and tell me if you got to the end of this game! i hope you enjoyed it!
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# final touches 1/26
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done! 1. sounds for every gatherable
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done charcoal 7
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done herbs 8
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done crystal 9
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done sand 6
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2. bandages?
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3. more letters!
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done! 4. background color of door sprite (make it better)
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done! 5. green, fine traits doesn't have working tiles?
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done! 6. make sure cursor resets when you're placing a new trait
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done! 7. make it so you can unselect final traits.
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1. green T piece is bugged?
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2. when starting to finalize traits it sshould reset cursors
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art for main screen, or "press z to start" |