compress damn you

ateli8.p8

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conversation.lua

@@ -74,7 +74,6 @@ function screen_conversation(convo, after, base)
             messages=convo
             message_idx=1
             conversation_active = true
-            toast("conversation!")
         end,
         update=conversation_update(after), 
         draw=conversation_draw

library.lua

@@ -32,28 +32,28 @@ library.item_blueprints = {
 		sprite=37, sprite_recolor={[12]=0},
 	},
 	well_water = {
-		title="well water", tags={"water"},
+		title="well water",
 		quality_base=30, quality_range=20,
 		trait_pool={"blue", "shiny"}, trait_chance=20,
 		description="water from\na well",
 		sprite=37,
 	},
 	herb = {
-		title="herb", tags={},
+		title="herb",
 		quality_base = 40, quality_range=30,
 		trait_pool={"green"}, trait_chance=30,
 		description="healing herb",
 		sprite=34,
 	},
 	crystal = {
-		title="crystal", tags={},
+		title="crystal",
 		quality_base=40, quality_range=60,
 		trait_pool={"shiny", "large", "blue"}, trait_chance=50,
 		description="cliff \ncrystals",
 		sprite=38,
 	},
 	sand = {
-		title="sand", tags={},
+		title="sand",
 		quality_base=30, quality_range=40,
 		trait_pool={"fine"}, trait_chance=40,
 		description="beach sand",
@@ -61,49 +61,49 @@ library.item_blueprints = {
 	},
 
 	distilled_water={
-		title="pure water",tags={"water", "pure"},
+		title="pure water",
 		quality_base=50, quality_range=20, --this should only be crafted, so this will be mostly irrelevant
 		trait_pool={}, trait_chance=0, -- again no use
 		description="filtered \npure water",
 		sprite=33,
 	},
 	reagent = {
-		title="reagent", tags={"red"},
+		title="reagent",
 		quality_base = 50, quality_range=10,
 		trait_pool={"shiny"}, trait_chance=20,
 		description="red reagent",
 		sprite=33, sprite_recolor={[12]=8},
 	},
 	bomb = {
-		title="bomb", tags={"explosive"},
+		title="bomb",
 		quality_base=60, quality_range=30,
 		trait_pool={}, trait_chance=0,
 		description="explodes for \nfun & profit",
 		sprite=35,
 	},
 	gunpowder={
-		title="gunpowder", tags={"explosive"},
+		title="gunpowder",
 		quality_base=30, quality_range=10,
 		trait_pool={"fine"}, trait_chance=30,
 		description="be careful!",
 		sprite=32, sprite_recolor={[6]=5},
 	},
 	potion = {
-		title="potion", tags={},
+		title="potion",
 		quality_base = 50, quality_range=10,
 		trait_pool={"red", "shiny", "curing"}, trait_chance=10,
 		description="a healing\npotion",
 		sprite=33, sprite_recolor={[12]=11}
 	},
 	polishing_powder = {
-		title="polish", tags={},
+		title="polish",
 		quality_base=70, quality_range=30,
 		trait_pool={"shiny", "fine"}, trait_chance=30,
 		description="polishing \npowder",
 		sprite=32,
 	},
 	starshine_gem={
-		title="starshine", tags={},
+		title="starshine",
 		quality_base=100, quality_range=50,
 		trait_pool={"shiny","large"}, trait_chance=40,
 		description="starshine \ngem!~",
@@ -139,33 +139,16 @@ library.recipes={
 	},
 	polishing_powder={
 		title="polish",
-		ingredients={"crystals","sand","charcoal"},
+		ingredients={"crystal","sand","charcoal"},
 		result="polishing_powder"
 	},
 	starshine_gem={
 		title="starshine",
-		ingredients={"crystals", "polish", "reagent"},
+		ingredients={"crystal", "polish", "reagent"},
 		result="starshine_gem"
 	}
 }
 
-if testing then
 inventory = {}
 
-	for i=1,4 do
-		local c = make_item(library.item_blueprints.charcoal)
-		c.traits = {"fine", "red"}
-		add(inventory, c)
-	end
-
-	for i=1,4 do
-		local w = make_item(library.item_blueprints.well_water)
-		w.traits = {"shiny", "blue"}
-		add(inventory, w)
-	end
-
-else
-	inventory = {}
-end
-
 grimoire = {library.recipes.distilled_water, library.recipes.potion}

screen_crafting.lua

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 grid_size = 8
-grid_width = 6
+grid_width = 5
-grid_height = 6
+grid_height = 5
 grid_x = 14
 grid_y = 34
 
@@ -408,8 +408,6 @@ function quality()
 end
 
 screen_crafting_raw = {before=crafting_before, draw=crafting_draw, update=crafting_update}
-screen_crafting = screen_crafting_raw
-if not testing then
 screen_crafting = screen_conversation({
         {phoebe_portrait, [[when i craft, i pick ingredients one by one with left and right]]},
         {phoebe_portrait, [[and press 🅾️ to lock them in before picking what traits to use]]},
@@ -423,4 +421,3 @@ if not testing then
         change_screen(screen_crafting)
     end,
     screen_crafting_raw)
-end

screen_inventory.lua

@@ -108,8 +108,6 @@ end
 
 
 screen_inventory_raw = {before=inventory_before, draw=inventory_draw, update=inventory_update}
-screen_inventory = screen_inventory_raw
-if not testing then
 screen_inventory = screen_conversation({
     {phoebe_portrait, [[oh right, this is the drawer where i keep my stuff!]]},}, 
     function() 
@@ -117,4 +115,3 @@ if not testing then
         change_screen(screen_inventory)
     end,
     screen_inventory_raw)
-end

screen_letters.lua

@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ in return.
 ]],}
 }
 letter_idx = 2
-letters_offset_x = -10
+letters_offset_x = -10-80
-letters_offset_y = 8
+letters_offset_y = 8+8
 
 function letters_move_to(x1, y1, x2, y2)
     return {
@@ -47,17 +47,17 @@ function letters_move_to(x1, y1, x2, y2)
                 s.active=false 
             end
         end,
-        draw=function(s)
+
-        end,
+        draw=function(s) end,
     }
 end
 
 function letters_move_out(x1, y1, x2, y2)
     new = letters_move_to(x1, y1, x2, y2)
-    new.draw = function(s) 
+    --[[new.draw = function(s) 
         draw_paper(letters_offset_x, letters_offset_y, 128, 128)
         draw_letter_on_paper(letters[letter_idx], letters_offset_x+14, letters_offset_y+4)
-    end
+    end]]
     return new
 end
 

screen_recipe_list.lua

@@ -1,10 +1,9 @@
 timer = 0
-pages = grimoire
 page_idx = 1
 prev_page_idx = 1
 animations={}
 
-current_recipe = pages[page_idx]
+current_recipe = grimoire[page_idx]
 
 recipe_list_offset_x=30
 recipe_list_offset_y=8
@@ -63,8 +62,8 @@ function flip_away(page)
             local x = 30 + page_flip
             local y = 8 + 0.1*page_flip
             draw_paper(x,y, 140, 140)
-            draw_recipe_on_paper(pages[s.prev_page_idx], x,y)
+            draw_recipe_on_paper(grimoire[s.prev_page_idx], x,y)
-            decorate_recipe_unfinished(pages[s.prev_page_idx], x, y)
+            decorate_recipe_unfinished(grimoire[s.prev_page_idx], x, y)
         end,
     }
 end
@@ -87,16 +86,16 @@ function flip_in(page, new_page)
         draw=function(s)
 
             draw_paper(30, 8, 140, 140)
-            draw_recipe_on_paper(pages[s.prev_page_idx], 30, 8)
+            draw_recipe_on_paper(grimoire[s.prev_page_idx], 30, 8)
-            decorate_recipe_unfinished(pages[s.prev_page_idx], 30, 8)
+            decorate_recipe_unfinished(grimoire[s.prev_page_idx], 30, 8)
 
             local page_flip = 600*(0.2-s.timer)
             local x = 30 + page_flip
             local y = 8 + 0.1*page_flip
 
             draw_paper(x,y, 140, 140)
-            draw_recipe_on_paper(pages[s.new_page_idx], x,y)
+            draw_recipe_on_paper(grimoire[s.new_page_idx], x,y)
-            decorate_recipe_unfinished(pages[s.new_page_idx], x, y)
+            decorate_recipe_unfinished(grimoire[s.new_page_idx], x, y)
         end
     }
 end
@@ -107,21 +106,21 @@ function pages_update()
         page_idx = page_idx - 1
     end
     
-    if btnp(1) and page_idx ~= #pages then
+    if btnp(1) and page_idx ~= #grimoire then
         animate(flip_in(page_idx, page_idx+1))
         page_idx = page_idx + 1
     end
 
     if btnp(4) then
         change_screen(screen_crafting)
-        current_recipe = pages[page_idx]
+        current_recipe = grimoire[page_idx]
     end
     if btnp(5) then
         animate(recipe_list_move_out(30, 8, 30+80, 8+8))
         change_screen(screen_workbench)
     end
 
-    current_recipe = pages[page_idx]
+    current_recipe = grimoire[page_idx]
 end
 
 function pages_draw()
@@ -134,17 +133,14 @@ function pages_draw()
     decorate_recipe_unfinished(current_recipe, recipe_list_offset_x, recipe_list_offset_y)
 end
 
-recipe_tutorial = {
+screen_recipe_list = {draw=pages_draw, update=pages_update}
+screen_recipe_list = screen_conversation({
         {phoebe_portrait, [[this is all my recipes. they each list what they need for ingredients.]]},
         {phoebe_portrait, [[go through them with left and right, or]]},
         {phoebe_portrait, [[press ❎ to back out to the workbench. 🅾️ will start crafting!!]]},
-}
+    }, 
-screen_recipe_list = {draw=pages_draw, update=pages_update}
-if not testing then
-    screen_recipe_list = screen_conversation(recipe_tutorial, 
     function() 
         screen_recipe_list = {draw=pages_draw, update=pages_update}
         change_screen(screen_recipe_list)
     end,
     screen_recipe_list)
-end

screen_title.lua

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ function title_update()
 			{phoebe_portrait, "hadn't taught me about fireworks. my mother is an adventurer instead"},
 			{phoebe_portrait, "of learning alchemy, so now there's no one to carry on the tradition."},
 			{phoebe_portrait, "the town's pretty broken up about it but i'm doing my best to carry on."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "but i just know the basics of picking herbs and purifying water."},
+			{phoebe_portrait, "but i only know the basics of picking herbs and purifying water."},
 		},
 		function() change_screen(screen_workbench) end,
 		{update=walkaround_update, draw=walkaround_draw}))

screen_walkaround.lua

@@ -1,21 +1,22 @@
 player_sprite_number = 48
 player_x, player_y = 24,16
-step_timer, stride_length = 0, 4
+step_timer = 0
 
 locations = {}
 
 function crystals(story_state)
 	add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.crystal))
-	change_screen(screen_conversation({{phoebe_portrait, "my family makes things out of these crystals! i'll take one."}}))
+	change_screen(screen_conversation({{phoebe_portrait, "you can use these crystals for a lot."}}))
+	toast("received crystal!")
 end
 locations["5,0"]=crystals
 locations["6,0"]=crystals
 
-
 function barrel(story_state)
 	sfx(1)
 	change_screen(screen_conversation({{phoebe_portrait, "it's a barrel!"}}))
 end
+
 locations["2,1"]=barrel
 locations["10,10"]=barrel
 
@@ -64,9 +65,6 @@ locations["6,15"] = beach
 locations["7,15"] = beach
 
 function interact(x, y)
-	if testing then
-		toast(x .. "," .. y)
-	end
 	result = locations[flr(x) .. "," .. flr(y)]
 	if result ~= nil then result(story) end
 end
@@ -91,9 +89,7 @@ function walkaround_update()
 	if dy == 1 then up, down = false, true end
 	if dx ~= 0 or dy ~= 0 then moved = true end
 
-	if testing then dx, dy = 2*dx, 2*dy end
 	if flags_from_xy(player_x + dx, player_y + dy) & 0x80 == 0 then player_x, player_y = player_x + dx, player_y + dy end
-	if testing then dx, dy = dx/2, dy/2 end
 	
 	if moved then
 		test_x, test_y = player_x + 8*dx, player_y + 8*dy
@@ -126,7 +122,7 @@ function update_player_sprite()
 
 	if moved then
 		step_timer += 1
-		if step_timer > stride_length then 
+		if step_timer > 4 then 
 			step_timer = 0
 			if player_sprite_number % 2 == 0 then player_sprite_number += 1
 			elseif player_sprite_number % 2 ~= 0 then player_sprite_number -= 1 end
@@ -135,7 +131,6 @@ function update_player_sprite()
 end
 
 screen_walkaround = {update=walkaround_update, draw=walkaround_draw}
-if not testing then
 screen_walkaround = screen_conversation({
 		{phoebe_portrait, [[oh, and this is the town! all sorts of things to do here.]]},
 		{phoebe_portrait, [[like i could go get water from the well to the east,]]},
@@ -147,29 +142,45 @@ if not testing then
         change_screen(screen_walkaround)
     end,
     screen_walkaround)
-end
 
 fireworks = {}
 stars = {}
 drag = 0.1
 fireworks_frequency = 8
+function work(f)
+	local vel = sqrt(f.vx*f.vx+f.vy*f.vy)
+	f.x += f.vx
+	f.y += f.vy 
+	f.vx = f.vx*(1-drag*velocity)
+	f.vy = f.vy*(1-drag*velocity)
+	return vel
+end
+
 function fireworks_update()
 	walkaround_update()
 
 	new_fireworks = {}
 	new_stars = {}
 
-	if rnd(100) < fireworks_frequency then add(new_fireworks, new_firework()) end
+	if rnd(100) < fireworks_frequency then add(new_fireworks, {
+		x=rnd(128),
+		y=rnd(112)+16,
+		vx=rnd(0.4)-0.2,
+		vy=-5+rnd(1),
+		c=rnd({10, 8, 7})
+	}) end
 
 	for f in all(fireworks) do
-		velocity = sqrt(f.vx*f.vx + f.vy*f.vy)
+		if work(f) < 0.2 then
-		f.x = f.x + f.vx
-		f.y = f.y + f.vy
-		f.vx = f.vx*(1-drag*velocity)
-		f.vy = f.vy*(1-drag*velocity)
-		if velocity < 0.2 then
 			for i=1,10 do
-				add(new_stars,new_star(f))
+				local theta = rnd(2)
+				add(new_stars,{
+					x=f.x,
+					y=f.y,
+					vx = sin(theta)*2,
+					vy = cos(theta)*2,
+					c=f.c
+				})
 			end
 		else
 			add(new_fireworks, f)
@@ -177,12 +188,7 @@ function fireworks_update()
 	end
 
 	for s in all(stars) do
-		velocity = sqrt(s.vx*s.vx + s.vy*s.vy)
+		if work(f) > 0.2 then
-		s.x = s.x + s.vx
-		s.y = s.y + s.vy
-		s.vx = s.vx*(1-drag*velocity)
-		s.vy = s.vy*(1-drag*velocity)
-		if velocity > 0.2 then
 			add(new_stars, s)
 		end
 	end
@@ -191,28 +197,6 @@ function fireworks_update()
 	stars = new_stars
 end
 
-function new_firework() 
-	return {
-		alive=true,
-		x=rnd(128),
-		y=rnd(112)+16,
-		vx=rnd(0.4)-0.2,
-		vy=-5+rnd(1),
-		c=rnd({10, 8, 7})
-	}
-end
-function new_star(t)
-	z = rnd(2)
-	return {
-		alive=true,
-		x=t.x,
-		y=t.y,
-		vx = sin(z)*2,
-		vy = cos(z)*2,
-		c=t.c
-	}
-end
-
 function fireworks_draw()
 	walkaround_draw()
 

screen_workbench.lua

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ function bench_draw()
 
     draw_background()
 
-    current_recipe = pages[page_idx]
+    current_recipe = grimoire[page_idx]
 
     outwards_x = 80 
     outwards_y = outwards_x/10
@@ -34,14 +34,13 @@ function bench_draw()
     draw_recipe_on_paper(current_recipe, 30+outwards_x, 8+outwards_y)
     decorate_recipe_unfinished(current_recipe, 30+outwards_x, 8+outwards_y)
 
-    draw_paper(-10-outwards_x, 8+outwards_y, 128, 128)
+    draw_paper(letters_offset_x, letters_offset_y, 128, 128)
-    draw_letter_on_paper(letters[letter_idx], 4-outwards_x, 12+outwards_y)
+    draw_letter_on_paper(letters[letter_idx], letters_offset_x+14, letters_offset_y+4)
 
     draw_drawer()
 end
 
 screen_workbench = {draw=bench_draw, update=bench_update}
-if not testing then
 screen_workbench = screen_conversation({
         {phoebe_portrait, [[this is my workbench.]]},
         {phoebe_portrait, [[if you press left or right you can see my letters or recipes.]]},
@@ -52,4 +51,3 @@ if not testing then
         change_screen(screen_workbench)
     end,
     screen_workbench)
-end

script_charcoal_seller.lua

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ function script_charcoal_seller(s) -- the brick house!
 	elseif s.main == 7 then
 		if s.branch_hans == 1 then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{seller_portrait, "look, if you get me the fireworks, i can set up a show. three boxes should do it."}
+				{seller_portrait, "if you get me the fireworks, i can set up a show. three boxes should do it."}
 			}))
 			s.branch_hans = 2
 		elseif s.branch_hans == 2 then

script_lenore.lua

@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@ function script_lenore(story_state)
 				{lenore_portrait, [[my usual pharmacist is on vacation.]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[think you could take this recipe and make a potion for a patient?]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[she lives in the house with a red roof just to the east of here.]]},
-				{lenore_portrait, [[there should be healing herbs southeast of here.]]},
+				{lenore_portrait, [[healing herbs grow southeast of here.]]},
-				{lenore_portrait, [[oh, and by the way -- here's that reagent i promised you.]]},
+				{lenore_portrait, [[and here's that reagent i promised you.]]},
 				{phoebe_portrait, [[do you have a recipe for reagent? i'd love to learn to make it!]]},
-				{lenore_portrait, [[yeah, sure. you start by doing this...]], function() 
+				{lenore_portrait, [[yeah, sure. you start like this...]], function() 
 					del(inventory, water)
 					add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.reagent))
 					add(grimoire, library.recipes.reagent)
@@ -41,15 +41,15 @@ function script_lenore(story_state)
 	elseif story_state.main == 7 then
 		if story_state.branch_lenore == 1 then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{lenore_portrait, [[whoa, you can't just set off fireworks willy-nilly. get me 3 clean bandages and a distilled water.]]},
+				{lenore_portrait, [[whoa, you can't just set off fireworks willy-nilly.]]},
-				{lenore_portrait, [[you can't do something as dangerous as fireworks without being prepared for the worst.]]},
+				{lenore_portrait, "get me 3 distilled water for cleaning bandages and 3 buckets of well water for fire."},
 				{phoebe_portrait, [[you got it!!]]},
 			}))
 			story_state.branch_lenore = 2
 		elseif story_state.branch_lenore == 2 then
-			local bandages = player_has("bandages", 3)
+			local clean_water = player_has("distilled water", 3)
-			local water = player_has("distilled water")
+			local well_water = player_has("well water", 3)
-			if bandages == nil or water == nil then
+			if clean_water == nil or well_water == nil then
 				change_screen(screen_conversation({
 					{lenore_portrait, [[i need 3 clean bandages and a distilled water.]]}
 				}))
@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@ function script_lenore(story_state)
 				change_screen(screen_conversation({
 					{lenore_portrait, [[thanks. this looks good. i'll meet you at the library for viewing when you're ready.]]}
 				}))
-				for x in all(bandages) do del(inventory, x) end
+				for x in all(clean_water) do del(inventory, x) end
-				del(inventory, water)
+				for x in all(well_water) do del(inventory, x) end
 				
 				story_state.branch_lenore = 3
 				if story_state.branch_hans == 3 and story_state.branch_lenore == 3 and story_state.branch_brigitte == 2 then

script_library.lua

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ function script_library(s)
 	elseif s.main == 6 then
 		if not s.got_crystal_book then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[stef! i need books about crystals! how to make them!]]},
+				{phoebe_portrait, [[stef! i need books about gems! how to make them!]]},
 				{librarian_portrait, [[gems, huh? let me check...]]},
 				{librarian_portrait, [[here, does this help?]]},
 				{phoebe_portrait, [[yes, this is perfect! let's see...]]},
@@ -41,8 +41,7 @@ function script_library(s)
 					add(grimoire, library.recipes.starshine_crystal)
 					add(grimoire, library.recipes.polishing_powder)
 				end},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[i can get crystal from the cliffs, sand from the beach, it's got a recipe for]]},
+				{phoebe_portrait, "i can get crystal from the cliffs and sand from the beach!"},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[polishing powder...]]},
 			}))
 			s.got_crystal_book = true
 		else
@@ -65,7 +64,6 @@ function script_library(s)
 			{neighbor_portrait, [[thanks, phoebe!]]},
 			{seller_portrait, [[thanks, phoebe.]]},
 			{phoebe_portrait, [[thank you all for helping out so much. i couldn't have done it without you.]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[and thank you, player, for playing my game!~]]}
 		}, nil, {update=fireworks_update, draw=fireworks_draw}))
 		screen_walkaround = {update=fireworks_update, draw=fireworks_draw}
 		screen_workbench = screen_conversation({

script_neighbor.lua

@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ function script_neighbor(s)
 		else
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{phoebe_portrait, [[hello! i was asked to bring you a potion!]]},
-				{neighbor_portrait, [[oh my goodness! that's so kind. i injured my back trying to get a rock out]]},
+				{neighbor_portrait, [[that's so kind! i injured my back trying to get a rock out]]},
-				{neighbor_portrait, [[of my farm. this potion will fix me right up.]]},
+				{neighbor_portrait, [[of my field. this potion will fix me right up.]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[... hey, you're an alchemist, right?]]},
 				{phoebe_portrait, [[of course!]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[i've heard that alchemists can make explosives. a bomb could get rid of]]}, 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ function script_neighbor(s)
 				{phoebe_portrait, [[i didn't! she was incredibly rude and basically told me to fuck off!]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[huh, i wonder what bee's in her bonnet.]]},
 				{phoebe_portrait, [[she kept talking about how there's no great alchemy left in pilton.]]},
-				{neighbor_portrait, [[maybe what she needs is someone to impress her.]]}
+				{neighbor_portrait, [[maybe she needs someone to impress her.]]}
 			}))
 			del(inventory, bomb)
 			s.main = 5
@@ -56,14 +56,14 @@ function script_neighbor(s)
 		}))
 	elseif s.main == 6 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
-			{neighbor_portrait, [[that bomb worked a treat on my boulder problem!]]},
+			{neighbor_portrait, [[that bomb worked a treat on my boulder!]]},
 			{phoebe_portrait, [[hooray!]]}
 		}))
 	elseif s.main == 7 then
 		if s.branch_brigitte == 1 then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[the fireworks festival? on my farm? you betcha!]]},
-				{neighbor_portrait, [[since harvest is over it's totally free!]]},
+				{neighbor_portrait, [[since harvest is over it's totally free.]]},
 				{phoebe_portrait, [[yippee!]]},
 			}))
 			s.branch_brigitte = 2
@@ -71,15 +71,10 @@ function script_neighbor(s)
 				s.branch_main = 8
 			end
 		elseif s.branch_brigitte == 2 then
-			change_screen(screen_conversation({
+			change_screen(screen_conversation({{neighbor_portrait, [[meet up at the library for viewing, right?]]}}))
-				{neighbor_portrait, [[meet up at the library for viewing, right?]]}
-			}))
-
 		end
 	elseif s.main == 8 then
-		change_screen(screen_conversation({
+		change_screen(screen_conversation({{neighbor_portrait, [[meetchya at the library for watching the fireworks!]]}}))
-			{neighbor_portrait, [[meetchya at the library for watching the fireworks!]]}
-		}))
 	elseif s.main == 9 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({{door_portrait, "[no one is here.]"}}))
 	end

script_witch.lua

@@ -29,7 +29,6 @@ function script_witch(s)
 			{witch_portrait, "pah. no one of your generation knows the ways."},
 			{phoebe_portrait, "well maybe if someone would teach us-"},
 			{witch_portrait, "maybe if you showed any promise i could teach you."},
-			{witch_portrait, "your generation has forgotten the ways of old."},
 			{phoebe_portrait, "grrrr, you old hag!"},
 			{witch_portrait, "hm."},
 			{witch_portrait, "..."},
@@ -37,15 +36,28 @@ function script_witch(s)
 			{witch_portrait, "if you can do this, i might consider you to have potential."},
 		}))
 		s.main = 6
+		add(letters, {
+[[hey phoebe!
+
+thanks for that bomb!
+it worked a treat. my 
+field is clean and clear.
+give a shout if there's
+anything you need any
+time!
+
+- brigitte
+]]
+		})
 	elseif s.main == 6 then
-		local crystal = player_has("starshine")
+		local crystal = player_has("starshine", 1, {"red", "shiny"})
 		if crystal == nil then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{door_portrait, "[there is no answer to your knocking.]"}
 			}))
 		else
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{witch_portrait, "hm. this is... passable. it's passable enough that I will help you."},
+				{witch_portrait, "hm. this is... passable. i will help you."},
 				{witch_portrait, "my bones are too tired to keep up this fight."},
 				{witch_portrait, "i can teach you to make fireworks."},
 				{phoebe_portrait, "fireworks! the festival?!"},
@@ -61,8 +73,7 @@ function script_witch(s)
 				{phoebe_portrait, "keep it down, i'm thinking."},
 				{phoebe_portrait, "a fireworks festival! that would be so incredible!"},
 				{phoebe_portrait, "but she's right. i'll have to call in favors."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "okay. i can make this happen."},
+				{phoebe_portrait, "hans the charcoal seller used to run the show itself."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "hans the charcoal seller used to set up the show."},
 				{phoebe_portrait, "i have to talk to lenore about safety."},
 				{phoebe_portrait, "and i should ask brigitte if we can use her farm!"},
 			}))

utils.lua

@@ -36,13 +36,20 @@ function filter_list(arr, func)
     return new
 end
 
-function player_has(requirement, count)
+function player_has(requirement, count, traits)
     if count == nil then count = 1 end
     output = {}
     for x in all(inventory) do
         if x.title == requirement or contains(x.tags, requirement) then
+            for t in all(traits) do
+                if not contains(x.traits, t) then 
+                    goto continue 
+                end
+            end
             if count == 1 then return x end
             add(output, x)
+            
+            ::continue::
         end
     end
     if #output >= count then
@@ -62,7 +69,8 @@ function make_item(blueprint)
     --item.title = blueprint.title
     --item.description = blueprint.description
     item.quality = flr(blueprint.quality_base + rnd(blueprint.quality_range))
-    item.tags = deepcopy(blueprint.tags)
+    if blueprint.tags then item.tags = deepcopy(blueprint.tags)
+    else item.tags = {} end
     item.traits = {}
     if rnd(100) < blueprint.trait_chance then
         add(item.traits, rnd(blueprint.trait_pool))
@@ -126,16 +134,6 @@ function wrap(str, line_length)
                 output = output .. "\n"
                 current_line_length = 0
             end
-
-            while #w > line_length do
-                output = output .. sub(w, 1, line_length) .. "-\n"
-                w = sub(w, line_length)
-                current_line_length = 0
-            end
-
-            while w[1] == " " do
-                w = sub(w, 2)
-            end
         end
 
         output = output .. w .. " "