update to version 1.16

2024-02-04 16:01:23 -05:00 · 2024-02-04 16:01:23 -05:00 · 20493d93de
commit 20493d93de
parent fec1698236
18 changed files with 679 additions and 573 deletions
--- a/art.lua
+++ b/art.lua
@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ base_text_color = 5
 blank_ingredient_outline_color = 6
 light_text_color = 7

-phoebe_portrait = 72
+ph_p = 72
 lenore_portrait = 76
 seller_portrait = 136
 neighbor_portrait = 140
--- a/ateli8.p8
+++ b/ateli8.p8
@ -1,6 +1,9 @@
 pico-8 cartridge // http://www.pico-8.com
 version 41
 __lua__
+-- atelier phoebe
+-- by shoofle
+
 #include utils.lua
 #include library.lua

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--- a/conversation.lua
+++ b/conversation.lua
@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ function conversation_draw(screen)
    --prev_screen.draw()
    message = messages[message_idx]

-    if message[1] == phoebe_portrait then
+    if message[1] == ph_p then
        phoebe_say(unpack(message))
    else
        draw_chatbox(unpack(message))
--- a/library.lua
+++ b/library.lua
@ -1,6 +1,3 @@
--tags represent what the object *is*
--traitss represent *special qualities* *beyoond* the default for that object.
-testing = true
 story = {
 	main=1,
 	branch_lenore=1,
@ -70,7 +67,7 @@ library.item_blueprints = {
 		title="reagent",
 		quality_base = 50, quality_range=10,
 		trait_pool={"shiny"}, trait_chance=20,
-		description="red reagent",
+		description="alchemical \nreagent",
 		sprite=33, sprite_recolor={[12]=8},
 	},
 	bomb = {
--- a/notes.md
+++ b/notes.md
@ -1,3 +1,16 @@
+# release notes
+hey everyone i made... a little tiny video game! please play it!
+
+it's a bite-size fangame for the atelier franchise, about being a young alchemist in a town down on its luck. can you bring back the fireworks festival that used to light up the skies?
+
+https://shoofle.net/static/atelier/ateli8.html it should be playable well on mobile, it takes about 15 minutes to play, and has no save or load. i am very proud of it and it's very short.
+
+if you play it, please let me know! if you play it and it crashes, especially please let me know! i think i ironed out all the major crash spots but there might be one or two lurking somewhere.
+
+i made a dialog-heavy crafting game in pico-8 because i do not fear god or reason!
+
+one of my goals with #AtelierPhoebe was to make a game that had everything it needed to be a Real Game, even if it didn't actually have enough content/length to justify those things. obviously there's a lot more ui and interface stuff i could have added for that (like save/loads and more menus) but i had a good time making something weird. it's by far the most finished game i've ever made.
+
 # story states:

 story state: 1
@ -214,4 +227,9 @@ done! 7. make it so you can unselect final traits.
 1. green T piece is bugged?
 2. when starting to finalize traits it sshould reset cursors

-art for main screen, or "press z to start"
+# final touches 1/27
+
+1. art for main screen, or "press z to start"
+2. witch tower two tiles tall maybe?
+3. anomalous green tiles bug? when you place a tile, ssometimes it removes non-overlapping traits
+4. draw upper half of map, then player ssprite, then lower half, to enssure better layering?
--- a/screen_crafting.lua
+++ b/screen_crafting.lua
@ -4,218 +4,294 @@ grid_height = 5
 grid_x = 14
 grid_y = 34

-c = {
-    ing_slot=1, -- the slot in the recipe currently being modified, whether sselecting trait or ingredient
-    ing_idx=1, -- the index into filtered ingredients of the current ingredient selection
-    trait_slot=0, -- the trait sslot of the recipe we're modifying.
-    x=0, y=0 -- x y coordinates in the puzzle grid for the current trait
+center_glyph = 132
+
+
+cursor = {
+    ing_slot=1,
+    ing_idx=1, 
+    trait_slot=1,
+    x=0, y=0, 
+    big_button=false,
+}
+partial_recipe = {
+    ingredients = {}, 
+    trait_listings = {},
+    final_selected_traits = {} 
 }

-center_glyph = 132
-ingredients = {}
-- traits which have been placed
-traits = {}
+state = {
+    choosing_ingredient = true, 
+    placing_trait = false, 
+    finalizing = false, 
    
-choosing_ingredient = true
-placing_trait = false
-finalizing = false
-big_button = false
-final_trait_options = {}
-final_selected_traits = {}
+    filtered_ingredients={},
+    final_trait_options={}, 
+}

 function crafting_before()
    center_glyph = rnd({132, 134, 164, 166})
-    c.x = 0
-    c.y = 0
-    c.ing_slot = 1
-    c.ing_idx = 1
-    c.trait_slot = 0

-    ingredients = {}
-    traits = {}
-    final_trait_options = {}
+    cursor = {
+        ing_slot=1, 
+        ing_idx=1, 
+        trait_slot=1, 
+        x=0, y=0,
+        big_button=false, -- are we selecting the big button?
+    }

-    choosing_ingredient = true
-    placing_trait = false
-    finalizing = false
-    big_button = false
+    partial_recipe = {
+        ingredients = {}, 
+        trait_listings = {},
+        final_selected_traits = {} 
+    }
+
+    state = {
+        -- three state flags for which phase of synthesis we're in
+        choosing_ingredient = true, -- choosing an ingredient for one of the slots of the recipe.
+        placing_trait = false, -- placing a trait into the grid.
+        finalizing = false, -- selecting the final traits and clicking the create glyph
+        -- arrays in use
+        filtered_ingredients={}, -- the filtered list of ingredients we could use for the currently selected slot
+        final_trait_options={}, -- all the traits which were active at the end of the 
+    }
+    update_filtered_ingredients()
 end

 function crafting_update()
-	if choosing_ingredient then 
+	if state.choosing_ingredient then 
 		crafting_choice_update()
-	elseif placing_trait then
+	elseif state.placing_trait then
 		crafting_place_update()
-	elseif finalizing then
+	elseif state.finalizing then
        crafting_finalize_update()
    end
 end

 function crafting_choice_update()
-    requirement = current_recipe.ingredients[c.ing_slot]
-    filtered_ingredients = filter_list(
-        inventory, 
-        function(ing) 
-            if contains(ingredients, ing) then return false end
-            return requirement == ing.title or contains(ing.tags, requirement) 
-        end)
-    current_ingredient = filtered_ingredients[c.ing_idx]
+    local current_slot_requirement = current_recipe.ingredients[cursor.ing_slot]

+    if btnp(0) and cursor.ing_idx>1 then 
+        sfx(3)
+        cursor.ing_idx -= 1 
+    end
+    if btnp(1) and cursor.ing_idx<#state.filtered_ingredients then 
+        sfx(3)
+        cursor.ing_idx += 1 
+    end

-    if btnp(0) and c.ing_idx>1 then 
-        sfx(3)
-        c.ing_idx -= 1 
-    end
-    if btnp(1) and c.ing_idx<#filtered_ingredients then 
-        sfx(3)
-        c.ing_idx += 1 
-    end
+    local current_ingredient = state.filtered_ingredients[cursor.ing_idx]

    if btnp(4) and current_ingredient ~= nil then
        -- lock in this ingredient and move on to moving traits arund
-        add(ingredients, current_ingredient)
-        if #current_ingredient.traits ~= 0 then
-            -- if there are traits on tihs ingredient, move on to setting traits.
-            choosing_ingredient = false
-            placing_trait = true
-            finalizing = false
-            c.trait_slot = 1
-            c.ing_idx = 1
-        elseif #ingredients < #current_recipe.ingredients then
-            -- if there are remaining ingredients to set, then we move to the next ingredient slot.
-            choosing_ingredient = true
-            placing_trait = false
-            finalizing = false
-            c.trait_slot = 0
-            c.ing_idx = 1
-            c.ing_slot += 1
+        add(partial_recipe.ingredients, current_ingredient)
+
+        if #(current_ingredient.traits) ~= 0 then 
+            -- if there are traits on this ingredient, set them.
+            state.choosing_ingredient = false
+            state.placing_trait = true
+
+            cursor.trait_slot = 1
+        elseif #partial_recipe.ingredients < #current_recipe.ingredients then 
+            -- if there are remaining ingredients to set, do that.
+            cursor.ing_idx = 1 
+            cursor.ing_slot += 1 
+            update_filtered_ingredients()
        else
-            -- if there are no more ingredients to set, then we finalize.
-            sfx(2)
-            c.x, c.y = 0, 0
-            final_trait_options = filter_list(traits, function(x) return x.active end)
-            choosing_ingredient = false
-            placing_trait = false
-            final_selected_traits = {}
-            finalizing = true
-            c.trait_slot = 0
-            c.ing_idx = 1
-            c.ing_slot = 1
+            -- if there are no more ingredients to set, then move on to finalizing.
+            begin_finalize()
        end
    end

-    if (btnp(5)) then
-        -- delete the last ingredient from the ingredients list
-        if #ingredients == 0 then
+    if btnp(5) then
+        local previous_index = cursor.ing_slot - 1
+        if #(partial_recipe.ingredients) == 0 then
+            -- if there's no ingredients set, we back out.
            change_screen(screen_recipe_list) 
-        else
-            traits = filter_list(
-                traits, 
-                function(set_trait) return set_trait.from_ingredient_slot ~= #ingredients end
-                )

-            deli(ingredients)
-            c.trait_slot = 0
-            if choosing_ingredient and c.ing_slot > 1 then c.ing_slot -= 1 end
-            choosing_ingredient = true
-            placing_trait = false
+            --otherwise, there are ingreddients set, and cursor.ing_slot is greater than one.
+        elseif #(partial_recipe.ingredients[previous_index].traits) ~= 0 then
+            -- we're setting an ingredient.
+            -- the previous ingredient slot has an ingredient set with traits.
+            -- delete the last set trait and pick it up as our cursor.
+            local last_set_trait = deli(partial_recipe.trait_listings)
+            
+            cursor.ing_slot -= 1
+            cursor.ing_idx = 1
+            cursor.trait_slot = last_set_trait.ingredient_trait_slot
+            cursor.x = last_set_trait.x
+            cursor.y = last_set_trait.y
+
+            state.choosing_ingredient = false 
+            state.placing_trait = true
+        else
+            --we're setting an ingredient, but the previouus ingredient didn't have any traits.
+            deli(partial_recipe.ingredients)
+            cursor.ing_slot = cursor.ing_slot - 1
+            cursor.ing_idx = 1
+            update_filtered_ingredients()
        end
    end
 end

+function update_filtered_ingredients() 
+    local current_slot_requirement = current_recipe.ingredients[cursor.ing_slot]
+    state.filtered_ingredients = filter_list(
+        inventory, 
+        function(ing) 
+            if contains(partial_recipe.ingredients, ing) then return false end
+            if contains(ing.tags, current_recipe.ingredients[cursor.ing_slot]) then return true end
+            return current_slot_requirement == ing.title
+        end)
+end
+
 function crafting_place_update()
-    current_ingredient = ingredients[c.ing_slot]
-    current_trait = library.traits[current_ingredient.traits[c.trait_slot]]
+    local current_ingredient = partial_recipe.ingredients[cursor.ing_slot]
+    local current_trait_name = current_ingredient.traits[cursor.trait_slot]
+    local current_trait = library.traits[current_trait_name]
    
-    width = current_trait[4]
-    height = current_trait[5]
+    local width = current_trait[4]
+    local height = current_trait[5]

-    if btnp(0) and c.x>0 then c.x -= 1 end 
-    if btnp(1) and c.x+width < grid_width then c.x += 1 end
-    if btnp(2) and c.y>0 then c.y -= 1 end
-    if btnp(3) and c.y+height < grid_height then c.y += 1 end
+    if btnp(0) and cursor.x>0 then cursor.x -= 1 end 
+    if btnp(1) and cursor.x+width < grid_width then cursor.x += 1 end
+    if btnp(2) and cursor.y>0 then cursor.y -= 1 end
+    if btnp(3) and cursor.y+height < grid_height then cursor.y += 1 end

    if btnp(4) then
-        new_trait = {trait=current_trait, x=c.x, y=c.y, active=true, from_ingredient_slot=c.ing_slot}
+        -- make a new trait listing
+        local new_trait_listing = {
+            ingredient_i_belong_to=cursor.ing_slot, -- index of the ingredient this strait belongs to
+            ingredient_trait_slot=cursor.trait_slot, -- which trait slot we came from
+            x=cursor.x, y=cursor.y, --offset of the piece in the grid
+            trait = current_trait, -- the trait in question
+            active = true, -- whether the trait is active
+        }

-        for idx, trait in ipairs(traits) do
-            if overlaps(trait, new_trait) then
-                traits[idx].active = false
+        -- turn off all overlapped traits
+        for idx, trait_listing in ipairs(partial_recipe.trait_listings) do
+            if overlaps(trait_listing, new_trait_listing) then
+                trait_listing.active = false
            end
        end

-        add(traits, new_trait)
+        -- add it to the record!~
+        add(partial_recipe.trait_listings, new_trait_listing)

-        c.x, c.y = 0,0
-
-        if c.trait_slot < #current_ingredient.traits then 
-            -- if there's more traits to set, then we should keep setting traits.
-            choosing_ingredient = false
-            placing_trait = true
-            finalizing = false
-            c.trait_slot += 1
-        elseif c.ing_slot < #current_recipe.ingredients then
+        -- move on to the next step
+        if cursor.trait_slot < #current_ingredient.traits then 
+            -- if there's more traits to set, then we should keep setting traits!
+            cursor.trait_slot += 1
+        elseif cursor.ing_slot < #current_recipe.ingredients then
            -- if there's more ingredients to set, then we move on to setting ingredients.
-            choosing_ingredient = true
-            placing_trait = false
-            finalizing = false
-            c.trait_slot = 0
-            c.ing_slot += 1
+            state.choosing_ingredient = true
+            state.placing_trait = false
+            
+            cursor.trait_slot = 1
+            cursor.ing_slot += 1
+            cursor.ing_idx = 1
+            update_filtered_ingredients()
        else
            -- if there's no more ingredients to set, then we move on to finalizing.
-            sfx(2)
-            c.x, c.y = 0, 0
-            final_trait_options = filter_list(traits, function(x) return x.active end)
-            choosing_ingredient = false
-            placing_trait = false
-            finalizing = true
-            final_selected_traits = {}
-            c.trait_slot = 0
-            c.ing_slot = 1
+            begin_finalize()
        end
    end
-    if (btnp(5)) then
-        undo_ingredient()
+
+    if btnp(5) then
+        -- we are placing traits.
+        -- that means that cursor.ing_slot refers to an ingredient which is set
+        -- and cursor.trait_slot refers to 1 or 2, and one which isn't set.
+        -- if curssor.trait_slot is 2, then we should delete the last set trait.
+        if cursor.trait_slot == 1 then
+            state.choosing_ingredient = true
+            state.placing_trait = false
+
+            deli(partial_recipe.ingredients)
+            update_filtered_ingredients()
+        else
+            -- if we were placing the second trait, then we should go to placing the first trait,
+            -- which we also need to remoove from the trait listings.
+            cursor.trait_slot -= 1
+            local last = deli(partial_recipe.trait_listings)
+            cursor.x = last.x 
+            cursor.y = last.y
+        end
    end
 end

-function crafting_finalize_update()
-    if #final_trait_options < 3 then big_button = true end
+function begin_finalize()
+    sfx(2)

-    if not big_button then
-        newx, newy = c.x, c.y
+    state.final_trait_options = filter_list(partial_recipe.trait_listings, function(x) return x.active end)
+    
+    state.choosing_ingredient = false
+    state.placing_trait = false
+    state.finalizing = true
+    
+    cursor.x = 0 
+    cursor.y = 0
+end
+
+function crafting_finalize_update()
+    if #state.final_trait_options < 3 then cursor.big_button = true end
+
+    local newx = cursor.x
+    local newy = cursor.y
    if btnp(0) then newx -= 1 end
    if btnp(1) then newx += 1 end
    if btnp(2) then newy -= 1 end
    if btnp(3) then newy += 1 end

-        if (final_trait_options[2*newy + newx + 1] ~= nil) and newx <= 1 and newx >= 0 then
-            c.x, c.y = newx, newy
+    if not cursor.big_button 
+        and (state.final_trait_options[2*newy + newx + 1] ~= nil) 
+        and newx <= 1 
+        and newx >= 0 then
+        cursor.x, cursor.y = newx, newy
    elseif btnp(3) and not (btnp(0) or btnp(1) or btnp(2)) then
-            big_button = true
+        -- if the next selected thing was out of bounds but we pressed down, then we're highlighting the big button
+        cursor.big_button = true
    end
-        local i = 2*c.y + c.x + 1
+    local i = 2*cursor.y + cursor.x + 1

-        if btnp(4) and not big_button then
-            if contains(final_selected_traits, i) then
-                del(final_selected_traits, i)
-            elseif #final_selected_traits < 2 then
-                add(final_selected_traits, i)
+    if btnp(4) and not cursor.big_button then
+        if contains(partial_recipe.final_selected_traits, i) then
+            del(partial_recipe.final_selected_traits, i)
+        elseif #partial_recipe.final_selected_traits < 2 then
+            add(partial_recipe.final_selected_traits, i)
        end
    end
-        --todo: go back (btnp5)
-    else
-        if btnp(2) and #final_trait_options > 2 then big_button = false end
-        if btnp(4) then
+
+    if btnp(2) and cursor.big_button and #state.final_trait_options > 2 then 
+        -- if we're on the big button, and there's enough trait options, then if we press up, 
+        -- it should unsselect the big button.
+        cursor.big_button = false 
+    end
+    
+    if btnp(4) and cursor.big_button then
+        -- if you pressed o and had the big button selected, then do the thing!
        make_the_product()
-            big_button = false
+        cursor.big_button = false
    end
-        if btnp(5) and #final_trait_options < 3 then 
-            -- go back a step
-            undo_ingredient()
-            finalizing = false
-        elseif btnp(5) then
-            big_button = false
+
+    if btnp(5) then
+        local last_ingredient = partial_recipe.ingredients[#partial_recipe.ingredients]
+
+        if #last_ingredient.traits == 0 then
+            state.finalizing = false
+            state.choosing_ingredient = true
+
+            cursor.ing_idx = 1
+
+            deli(partial_recipe.ingredients)
+        else
+            local trait_listing = deli(partial_recipe.trait_listings)
+
+            state.finalizing = false
+            state.placing_trait = true
+
+            cursor.trait_slot = trait_listing.ingredient_trait_slot
+            cursor.x = trait_listing.x 
+            cursor.y = trait_listing.y 
        end
    end
 end
@ -223,41 +299,29 @@ end
 function make_the_product()
    local product = make_item(library.item_blueprints[current_recipe.result])
    product.quality = quality()
-    add(inventory, product)
-    for x in all(ingredients) do
-        del(inventory, x)
+
+    for ingredient in all(partial_recipe.ingredients) do
+        -- remove all the ingredientss that we used
+        del(inventory, ingredient)
    end
+
    product.traits = {}
-    if #final_trait_options < 3 then
-        for t in all(final_trait_options) do
-            add(product.traits, t.trait[1])
+
+    if #state.final_trait_options < 3 then
+        for trait_listing in all(state.final_trait_options) do
+            add(product.traits, trait_listing.trait[1])
        end
    else
-        for i in all(final_selected_traits) do
-            add(product.traits, final_trait_options[i].trait[1])
+        for idx in all(partial_recipe.final_selected_traits) do
+            add(product.traits, state.final_trait_options[idx].trait[1])
        end
    end
+
+    add(inventory, product)
    sfx(5)
    change_screen(screen_recipe_list)
 end

-function undo_ingredient()
-    if #ingredients == 0 then
-        change_screen(screen_recipe_list)
-    else
-        traits = filter_list(
-            traits, 
-            function(set_trait) return set_trait.from_ingredient_slot ~= #ingredients end
-            )
-
-        deli(ingredients)
-        c.trait_slot = 0
-        if choosing_ingredient and c.ing_slot > 1 then c.ing_slot -= 1 end
-        choosing_ingredient = true
-        placing_trait = false
-    end
-end
-
 function crafting_draw()
    cls()

@ -270,32 +334,109 @@ function crafting_draw()
    -- puzzle grid including pieces
    draw_grid()

-    if finalizing then
-        if #final_trait_options > 2 then
+    if state.finalizing then 
+        draw_finalizing_sheet()
+    end
+end
+
+function draw_grid()
+    map(0,0, grid_x,grid_y, grid_width+1,grid_height+1)
+    for t in all(partial_recipe.trait_listings) do
+        if t.active then
+           map(t.trait[2], t.trait[3], 
+                (t.x*grid_size)+grid_x, (t.y*grid_size)+grid_y, 
+                t.trait[4], t.trait[5])
+        end
+    end
+
+    if (state.placing_trait) then
+        local current_ingredient = partial_recipe.ingredients[cursor.ing_slot]
+        local current_trait_label = current_ingredient.traits[cursor.trait_slot]
+        local trait = library.traits[current_trait_label]
+
+        -- draw the currently selected trait into the grid
+        map(trait[2], trait[3], 
+            (cursor.x*grid_size)+grid_x, (cursor.y*grid_size)+grid_y, 
+            trait[4], trait[5])
+    end
+end
+
+function draw_recipe_in_progress_on_paper(x, y)
+    -- selected ingredients
+    for i, ing in ipairs(partial_recipe.ingredients) do
+        draw_ingredient_listing(ing, x+40, y + 26*i)
+    end
+    color(blank_ingredient_outline_color)
+
+    for i=(cursor.ing_slot+1),#current_recipe.ingredients do
+        print(current_recipe.ingredients[i], x+46, y+2+26*i+9)
+    end
+
+
+    -- quality listing
+    color(base_text_color)
+    print("quality", x+2, y+12)
+    print_quality(quality(), x+44, y+18)
+
+
+    if state.choosing_ingredient and cursor.ing_slot < #current_recipe.ingredients + 1 then
+        -- draw a box around the ingredient we're choosing
+        yc = y + 26*cursor.ing_slot
+        xc = x+40
+        rect(xc, yc, xc+55, yc+26,10)
+        spr(6, xc-8, yc+10)
+        spr(7, xc+56, yc+10)
+
+
+        local current_ingredient = state.filtered_ingredients[cursor.ing_idx]
+
+        if current_ingredient == nil then
+            color(blank_ingredient_outline_color)
+            print(current_recipe.ingredients[cursor.ing_slot], x+46, y+2+26*cursor.ing_slot+9)
+        else
+            -- draw the ingredient listing for the selected ingredient
+            draw_ingredient_listing(current_ingredient, xc, yc)
+        end 
+    elseif state.placing_trait then
+        -- draw a marker for the trait we're picking
+        yc = y + 26*cursor.ing_slot
+        yc = 3+yc+cursor.trait_slot*6
+        xc = x+38
+        spr(8, xc, yc)     
+    end
+
+    for i, t in ipairs(filter_list(partial_recipe.trait_listings, function(trait) return trait.active end)) do
+        color(base_text_color)
+        print(t.trait[1], x+5, y+78 + 8*i)
+    end
+end
+
+function draw_finalizing_sheet()
+    if #state.final_trait_options > 2 then
        draw_paper(24, 10, 128-24-24, 128-10-10)
        color(highlight_text_color)
        print("pick two traits\nto keep!",32, 20)

-            for i, trait in ipairs(final_trait_options) do
+        for i, trait_listing in ipairs(state.final_trait_options) do
            xi, yi = (i-1)%2, (i+i%2-2)/2
            x, y = 64-32+xi*32, 34+yi*8
-                if contains(final_selected_traits, i) then
-                    rect(x-2, y-2, x+30, y+6, 10)
+            if contains(partial_recipe.final_selected_traits, i) then
+                rect(x-1, y-1, x+29, y+5, 10)
            end
-                if not big_button and xi == c.x and yi == c.y then
+            if not cursor.big_button and xi == cursor.x and yi == cursor.y then
                rect(x-2, y-2, x+30, y+6, 0)
            end
-                if contains(final_selected_traits, i) then
+            if contains(partial_recipe.final_selected_traits, i) then
                color(highlight_text_color)
            else
                color(base_text_color)
            end
-                print(trait.trait[1], x, y )
+            print(trait_listing.trait[1], x, y )
        end
        
        --draw_paper(40, 76, 128-40-40, 12)
        color(highlight_text_color)
-            if big_button then
+        if cursor.big_button then
            pal(9,0)
        else
            palt(12, true)
@ -304,7 +445,7 @@ function crafting_draw()
        spr(center_glyph, 64-8, 80, 2, 2)
        pal()
        palt()
-            if big_button then
+        if cursor.big_button then
            color(12)
        else
            color(highlight_text_color)
@ -317,97 +458,29 @@ function crafting_draw()
        spr(center_glyph, 64-8, 60-8, 2, 2)
        pal()
        palt()
-            if big_button then
+        if cursor.big_button then
            color(12)
        else
            color(highlight_text_color)
        end
        print("create!", 64-12, 80)
    end
-    end
-end
-
-function draw_grid()
-    map(0,0, grid_x,grid_y, grid_width+1,grid_height+1)
-    for trait in all(traits) do
-        if trait.active then
-           map(trait.trait[2], trait.trait[3], 
-                (trait.x*grid_size)+grid_x, (trait.y*grid_size)+grid_y, 
-                trait.trait[4], trait.trait[5])
-        end
-    end
-
-    if (placing_trait) then
-        trait = library.traits[ingredients[c.ing_slot].traits[c.trait_slot]]
-
-        -- draw the currently selected trait into the grid
-        map(trait[2], trait[3], 
-            (c.x*grid_size)+grid_x, (c.y*grid_size)+grid_y, 
-            trait[4], trait[5])
-    end
-end
-
-function draw_recipe_in_progress_on_paper(x, y)
-    -- selected ingredients
-    for i, ing in ipairs(ingredients) do
-        draw_ingredient_listing(ing, x+40, y + 26*i)
-    end
-    color(blank_ingredient_outline_color)
-
-    for i=(c.ing_slot+1),#current_recipe.ingredients do
-        print(current_recipe.ingredients[i], x+46, y+2+26*i+9)
-    end
-
-
-    -- quality listing
-    color(base_text_color)
-    print("quality", x+2, y+12)
-    print_quality(quality(), x+44, y+18)
-
-
-    if (choosing_ingredient and c.ing_slot < #current_recipe.ingredients + 1) then
-        -- draw a box around the ingredient we're choosing
-        yc = y + 26*c.ing_slot
-        xc = x+40
-        rect(xc, yc, xc+55, yc+26,10)
-        spr(6, xc-8, yc+10)
-        spr(7, xc+56, yc+10)
-
-        if current_ingredient == nil then
-            color(blank_ingredient_outline_color)
-            print(current_recipe.ingredients[c.ing_slot], x+46, y+2+26*c.ing_slot+9)
-        else
-            -- draw the ingredient listing for the selected ingredient
-            draw_ingredient_listing(current_ingredient, xc, yc)
-        end 
-    elseif (placing_trait) then
-        -- draw a marker for the trait we're picking
-        yc = y + 26*c.ing_slot
-        yc = 3+yc+c.trait_slot*6
-        xc = x+38
-        spr(8, xc, yc)        
-    end
-
-    for i, t in ipairs(filter_list(traits, function(trait) return trait.active end)) do
-        color(base_text_color)
-        print(t.trait[1], x+5, y+78 + 8*i)
-    end
 end

 function quality() 
    local quality_sum = 0

-    for ing in all(ingredients) do
+    for ing in all(partial_recipe.ingredients) do
        quality_sum += ing.quality 
    end
    
-    if #ingredients > 1 then
-        quality_sum = flr(quality_sum/#ingredients)
+    if #partial_recipe.ingredients > 1 then
+        quality_sum = flr(quality_sum/#partial_recipe.ingredients)
    else
        quality_sum = flr(quality_sum)
    end
    
-    for trait in all(traits) do
+    for trait in all(partial_recipe.traits) do
        if trait.active then quality_sum += 5 end
    end
    
@ -416,12 +489,14 @@ end

 screen_crafting_raw = {before=crafting_before, draw=crafting_draw, update=crafting_update}
 screen_crafting = screen_conversation({
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[when i craft, i pick ingredients one by one with left and right]]},
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[and press 🅾️ to lock them in before picking what traits to use]]},
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[trying to fit them into the grid, which increases the quality. ]]},
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[two traits from those still in the grid at the end are added to the product!]]},
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[but if you overlap a trait, it will be removed.]]},
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[i've even heard of some traits that combine to form others!]]}
+        {ph_p, [[when i craft, i pick which of each ingredient to use with left and right,]]},
+        {ph_p, [[and press 🅾️ to lock them in.]]},
+        {ph_p, [[some items have additional traits for their special properties.]]},
+        {ph_p, [[i set a puzzle piece into the grid for each trait on the object.]]},
+        {ph_p, [[every trait i put in the grid increases the overall quality.]]},
+        {ph_p, [[but if you overlap other traits' tiles, it'll remove the old ones!]]},
+        {ph_p, [[then at the end, you can pick two traits to transfer]]},
+        {ph_p, [[onto the final product.]]},
    }, 
    function() 
        screen_crafting = screen_crafting_raw
--- a/screen_inventory.lua
+++ b/screen_inventory.lua
@ -5,6 +5,11 @@ inventory_cursor = {
    x=0, y=0,
 }

+function inventory_before()
+    inventory_cursor.x = 0
+    inventory_cursor.y = 0
+end
+
 function inventory_slide(x1, x2)
    return {
        timer = 0,
@ -28,25 +33,21 @@ function inventory_slide(x1, x2)
    }
 end

-function inventory_before()
-end
-
 function inventory_update()
    cx, cy = inventory_cursor.x, inventory_cursor.y
    if btnp(0) then cx -= 1 end
    if btnp(1) then cx += 1 end
    if btnp(2) then cy -= 1 end
    if btnp(3) then cy += 1 end
-    if cy >= 0 and cy < flr(#inventory/5) then
-        if cx >= 0 and cx < 5 then
+    if cy >= 0 and cy < flr(#inventory/5) and cx >= 0 and cx < 5 then
        inventory_cursor.x = cx
        inventory_cursor.y = cy
-        end
-    elseif cy == flr(#inventory / 5) then
-        if cx >= 0 and cx < #inventory % 5  then
+    elseif cy == flr(#inventory / 5) and cx >= 0 and cx < #inventory % 5 then
        inventory_cursor.x = cx
        inventory_cursor.y = cy
-        end
+    elseif btnp(3) then
+        animate(inventory_slide(inventory_drawer_height_max,0))
+        change_screen(screen_workbench)
    end

    if btnp(5) then
@ -100,16 +101,17 @@ function draw_drawer_contents()
 end

 function draw_item_sheet()
-    if #inventory ~= 0 then
+    local item = inventory[1 + 5*inventory_cursor.y + inventory_cursor.x]
+    if item ~= nil then
        draw_paper(35,94, 128-2*35,28)
-        draw_ingredient_listing(inventory[1 + 5*inventory_cursor.y + inventory_cursor.x], 35, 94)
+        draw_ingredient_listing(item, 35, 94)
    end
 end


 screen_inventory_raw = {before=inventory_before, draw=inventory_draw, update=inventory_update}
 screen_inventory = screen_conversation({
-    {phoebe_portrait, [[oh right, this is the drawer where i keep my stuff!]]},}, 
+    {ph_p, [[oh right, this is the drawer where i keep my stuff!]]},}, 
    function() 
        screen_inventory = screen_inventory_raw
        change_screen(screen_inventory)
--- a/screen_letters.lua
+++ b/screen_letters.lua
@ -102,6 +102,11 @@ function flip_in_letter(page, new_page)
 end

 function letters_update()
+    if (btnp(1) and letter_idx == #letters) or btnp(5) then
+        animate(letters_move_out(-10, 8, -10-80, 8+8))
+        change_screen(screen_workbench)
+    end
+
    if btnp(0) and letter_idx > 1 then
        animate(flip_away_letter(letter_idx))
        letter_idx -= 1
@ -111,11 +116,6 @@ function letters_update()
        animate(flip_in_letter(letter_idx, letter_idx+1))
        letter_idx = letter_idx + 1
    end    
-
-    if btnp(5) then
-        animate(letters_move_out(-10, 8, -10-80, 8+8))
-        change_screen(screen_workbench)
-    end
 end


@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ function draw_letter_on_paper(letter, x, y)
 end

 screen_letters = {draw=letters_draw, update=letters_update}
-screen_letters = screen_conversation({{phoebe_portrait, "ah. pile of letters i should be reading."}}, 
+screen_letters = screen_conversation({{ph_p, "ah. pile of letters i should be reading."}}, 
    function() 
        screen_letters = {draw=letters_draw, update=letters_update}
        change_screen(screen_letters)
--- a/screen_recipe_list.lua
+++ b/screen_recipe_list.lua
@ -101,6 +101,11 @@ function flip_in(page, new_page)
 end

 function pages_update()
+    if (btnp(0) and page_idx == 1) or btnp(5) then
+        animate(recipe_list_move_out(30, 8, 30+80, 8+8))
+        change_screen(screen_workbench)
+    end
+
    if btnp(0) and page_idx ~= 1 then
        animate(flip_away(page_idx))
        page_idx = page_idx - 1
@ -115,10 +120,6 @@ function pages_update()
        change_screen(screen_crafting)
        current_recipe = grimoire[page_idx]
    end
-    if btnp(5) then
-        animate(recipe_list_move_out(30, 8, 30+80, 8+8))
-        change_screen(screen_workbench)
-    end
    
    current_recipe = grimoire[page_idx]
 end
@ -135,9 +136,8 @@ end

 screen_recipe_list = {draw=pages_draw, update=pages_update}
 screen_recipe_list = screen_conversation({
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[this is all my recipes. they each list what they need for ingredients.]]},
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[go through them with left and right, or]]},
-        {phoebe_portrait, [[press ❎ to back out to the workbench. 🅾️ will start crafting!!]]},
+        {ph_p, [[this is all my recipes. they each list what they need for ingredients.]]},
+        {ph_p, [[go through them with left and right, or press 🅾️ to start crafting!!]]},
    }, 
    function() 
        screen_recipe_list = {draw=pages_draw, update=pages_update}
--- a/screen_title.lua
+++ b/screen_title.lua
@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 function title_update()
-	if btnp(4) then
+	if btnp(4) or btnp(5) then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
-			{phoebe_portrait, "hi! i'm phoebe! welcome to pilton!"},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "this is a small town known for our fireworks festival."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "or we would be. my grandfather, the town's best alchemist, died suddenly and"},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "hadn't taught me about fireworks. my mother took up adventuring"},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "instead of alchemy, so now there's no one to carry on the tradition."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "the town's pretty broken up about it but i'm doing my best to carry on."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "but i only know the basics of picking herbs and purifying water."},
+			{ph_p, "hi! i'm phoebe! welcome to pilton!"},
+			{ph_p, "this is a small town known for our fireworks festival."},
+			{ph_p, "or we would be. my grandfather, the town's best alchemist, died suddenly and"},
+			{ph_p, "hadn't taught me about fireworks. my mother took up adventuring"},
+			{ph_p, "instead of alchemy, so now there's no one to carry on the tradition."},
+			{ph_p, "the town's pretty broken up about it but i'm doing my best to carry on."},
+			{ph_p, "but i only know the basics of picking herbs and purifying water."},
 		},
 		function() change_screen(screen_workbench) end,
 		{update=walkaround_update, draw=walkaround_draw}))
@ -29,6 +29,10 @@ function title_draw()
 		end
 		x = print(big .. c, x, 30 + sin(x/128+time()/4)*2, col)
 	end
+
+	print("VERSION 1.16", 64-(5*4), 80)
+
+	print("press 🅾️ or ❎ to start", 64-(11*4), 90)
 end

 screen_title = {update=title_update, draw=title_draw}
--- a/screen_walkaround.lua
+++ b/screen_walkaround.lua
@ -1,80 +1,80 @@
-player_sprite_number = 48
-player_x, player_y = 24,16
+p_x, p_y = 24,16
 step_timer = 0
+player_sprite_number = 50

-locations = {}
+the_map = {}

 function crystals(story_state)
 	add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.crystal))
-	change_screen(screen_conversation({{phoebe_portrait, "you can use these crystals for a lot."}}))
+	change_screen(screen_conversation({{ph_p, "you can use these crystals for a lot."}}))
 	sfx(9)
 	toast("received crystal!")
 end
-locations["5,0"]=crystals
-locations["6,0"]=crystals
+the_map["5,0"]=crystals
+the_map["6,0"]=crystals

 function barrel(story_state)
 	sfx(1)
-	change_screen(screen_conversation({{phoebe_portrait, "it's a barrel!"}}))
+	change_screen(screen_conversation({{ph_p, "it's a barrel!"}}))
 end

-locations["2,1"]=barrel
-locations["10,10"]=barrel
+the_map["2,1"]=barrel
+the_map["10,10"]=barrel

-locations["3,1"]=function() -- the atelier!
+the_map["3,1"]=function() -- the atelier!
 	sfx(4)
 	change_screen(screen_workbench) 
 end
-locations["12,1"]=function() --at the well. give us ssome water
+the_map["12,1"]=function() --at the well. give us ssome water
 	add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.well_water))
-	change_screen(screen_conversation({{phoebe_portrait, "slurp!"}}))
+	change_screen(screen_conversation({{ph_p, "slurp!"}}))
 	toast("received water!")
 	sfx(0)
 end

-locations["3,10"] = script_charcoal_seller
-locations["11,5"] = script_neighbor
-locations["9,5"] = script_lenore
-locations["9,8"] = script_library
-locations["11,13"] = script_witch
+the_map["3,10"] = script_charcoal_seller
+the_map["11,5"] = script_neighbor
+the_map["9,5"] = script_lenore
+the_map["9,8"] = script_library
+the_map["11,13"] = script_witch

 function herbs(story_state)
 	add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.herb))
 	change_screen(screen_conversation({
-		{phoebe_portrait, "ooh, healing herbs! i'll take some. not more than 1/3 the patch though!"}
+		{ph_p, "ooh, healing herbs! i'll take some. not more than 1/3 the patch though!"}
 	}))
 	sfx(8)
 	toast("received herbs!")
 end

-locations["13,12"] = herbs
-locations["14,12"] = herbs
+the_map["13,12"] = herbs
+the_map["14,12"] = herbs

-locations["12,13"] = herbs
-locations["13,13"] = herbs
-locations["14,13"] = herbs
+the_map["12,13"] = herbs
+the_map["13,13"] = herbs
+the_map["14,13"] = herbs

-locations["12,14"] = herbs
-locations["13,14"] = herbs
-locations["14,14"] = herbs
+the_map["12,14"] = herbs
+the_map["13,14"] = herbs
+the_map["14,14"] = herbs

 function beach(story_state)
 	add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.sand))
 	change_screen(screen_conversation({
-		{phoebe_portrait, "how many grains of sand does it take before it becomes a pile?"}
+		{ph_p, "how many grains of sand does it take before it becomes a pile?"}
 	}))
 	sfx(6)
 	toast("received sand!")
 end

-locations["3,15"] = beach
-locations["4,15"] = beach
-locations["5,15"] = beach
-locations["6,15"] = beach
-locations["7,15"] = beach
+the_map["3,15"] = beach
+the_map["4,15"] = beach
+the_map["5,15"] = beach
+the_map["6,15"] = beach
+the_map["7,15"] = beach

 function interact(x, y)
-	result = locations[flr(x) .. "," .. flr(y)]
+	result = the_map[flr(x) .. "," .. flr(y)]
 	if result ~= nil then result(story) end
 end

@ -98,21 +98,21 @@ function walkaround_update()
 	if dy == 1 then up, down = false, true end
 	if dx ~= 0 or dy ~= 0 then moved = true end

-	if flags_from_xy(player_x + dx, player_y + dy) & 0x80 == 0 then player_x, player_y = player_x + dx, player_y + dy end
+	if flags_from_xy(p_x + dx, p_y + dy) & 0x80 == 0 then p_x, p_y = p_x + dx, p_y + dy end
 	
 	if moved then
-		test_x, test_y = player_x + 8*dx, player_y + 8*dy
+		t_x, t_y = p_x + 8*dx, p_y + 8*dy
 	elseif up then 
-		test_x, test_y = player_x, player_y - 8 
+		t_x, t_y = p_x, p_y - 8 
 	elseif down then 
-		test_x, test_y = player_x, player_y + 8 
+		t_x, t_y = p_x, p_y + 8 
 	elseif flip_x then
-		test_x, test_y = player_x - 8, player_y
+		t_x, t_y = p_x - 8, p_y
 	else
-		test_x, test_y = player_x + 8, player_y
+		t_x, t_y = p_x + 8, p_y
 	end

-	if btnp(4) then interact(test_x/8, test_y/8) end
+	if btnp(4) then interact(t_x/8, t_y/8) end

 end
 function walkaround_draw()
@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ function walkaround_draw()
 	map(0,16,0,0,16,16) -- draw the town map
 	update_player_sprite()

-	spr(player_sprite_number, player_x-4, player_y-8, 1,1, flip_x)
+	spr(player_sprite_number, p_x-4, p_y-8, 1,1, flip_x)
 	map(0,16,0,0,16,16, 0x40) -- redraw the tiles which are supposed to appear over the player! (flag 6)
 end
 function update_player_sprite()
@ -141,10 +141,10 @@ end

 screen_walkaround = {update=walkaround_update, draw=walkaround_draw}
 screen_walkaround = screen_conversation({
-		{phoebe_portrait, [[oh, and this is the town! all sorts of things to do here.]]},
-		{phoebe_portrait, [[like i could go get water from the well to the east,]]},
-		{phoebe_portrait, [[or pick up some charcoal from the red house to the southwest!]]},
-		{phoebe_portrait, [[just face a building and press ❎!]]}
+		{ph_p, [[oh, and this is the town! all sorts of things to do here.]]},
+		{ph_p, [[like i could go get water from the well to the east,]]},
+		{ph_p, [[or pick up some charcoal from the red house to the southwest!]]},
+		{ph_p, [[just face a building and press 🅾️!]]}
 	}, 
    function() 
        screen_walkaround = {draw=walkaround_draw, update=walkaround_update}
@ -157,7 +157,9 @@ stars = {}
 drag = 0.1
 fireworks_frequency = 8
 function work(f)
+	if f == nil or f.vx == nil or f.vy == nil or f.x == nil or f.y == nil then return 0 end -- why is this necessary.
 	local vel = sqrt(f.vx*f.vx + f.vy*f.vy)
+
 	f.x += f.vx
 	f.y += f.vy 
 	f.vx = f.vx*(1-(drag*vel))
@ -168,8 +170,8 @@ end
 function fireworks_update()
 	walkaround_update()

-	new_fireworks = {}
-	new_stars = {}
+	local new_fireworks = {}
+	local new_stars = {}

 	if rnd(100) < fireworks_frequency then add(new_fireworks, {
 		x=rnd(128),
@ -181,7 +183,7 @@ function fireworks_update()

 	for f in all(fireworks) do
 		local v = work(f)
-		if v < 0.2 or v > 100 then
+		if (v < 0.2 or v > 100) and (f.x ~= nil and f.y ~= nil and f.c ~= nil) then
 			for i=1,10 do
 				local theta = rnd(2)
 				add(new_stars,{
--- a/screen_workbench.lua
+++ b/screen_workbench.lua
@ -42,10 +42,10 @@ end

 screen_workbench = {draw=bench_draw, update=bench_update}
 screen_workbench = screen_conversation({
-        {phoebe_portrait, "this is my workbench."},
-        {phoebe_portrait, "if you press left or right you can see my letters or recipes"},
-        {phoebe_portrait, "and the drawer where i keep ingredients is up top."},
-        {phoebe_portrait, "you can press ❎ to back out to the workbench."},
+        {ph_p, "this is my workbench."},
+        {ph_p, "if you press left or right you can see my letters or recipes"},
+        {ph_p, "and the drawer where i keep ingredients is up top."},
+        {ph_p, "you can press ❎ to back out to the workbench."},
    }, 
    function() 
        screen_workbench = {draw=bench_draw, update=bench_update}
--- a/script_charcoal_seller.lua
+++ b/script_charcoal_seller.lua
@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ function script_charcoal_seller(s) -- the brick house!
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{seller_portrait, "hey phoebe. if your family's not doing the festival this year"},
 				{seller_portrait, "you don't need the whole bulk order of charcoal, right?"},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "yeah."},
+				{ph_p, "yeah."},
 				{seller_portrait, "well, you can take as much as you need.", function()
 					add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.charcoal))
 					sfx(7)
@ -57,12 +57,15 @@ function script_charcoal_seller(s) -- the brick house!
 			add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.charcoal))
 			sfx(7)
 			toast("received charcoal!")
+			if story_state.branch_hans == 3 and story_state.branch_lenore == 3 and story_state.branch_brigitte == 2 then
+				story_state.main = 8
+			end 
 		end -- end hans branch
-	elseif story_state.main == 8 then
+	elseif s.main == 8 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
 			{seller_portrait, "i'll meet you at the library for watching the fireworks!"},
 		}))
-	elseif story_state.main == 9 then
+	elseif s.main == 9 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({{door_portrait, "[no one is here.]"}}))
 		sfx(7)
 		add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.charcoal))
--- a/script_lenore.lua
+++ b/script_lenore.lua
@ -3,21 +3,21 @@ function script_lenore(story_state)
 		water = player_has(library.recipes.distilled_water.title)
 		if water == nil then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[hi lenore!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[hi lenore!]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[hey alchemist. did you get my letter?]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[ah! i haven't gotten around to it but i'll get right on it!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[ah! i haven't gotten around to it but i'll get right on it!]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[thanks, kid.]]}
 			}))
 		else
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[hey lenore! here's the clean water you requested!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[hey lenore! here's the clean water you requested!]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[thanks, kid. there's one other thing.]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[my usual pharmacist is on vacation.]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[think you could take this recipe and make a potion for a patient?]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[she lives in the house with a red roof just to the east of here.]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[healing herbs grow southeast of here.]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[and here's that reagent i promised you.]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[do you have a recipe for reagent? i'd love to learn to make it!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[do you have a recipe for reagent? i'd love to learn to make it!]]},
 				{lenore_portrait, [[yeah, sure. you start like this...]], function() 
 					del(inventory, water)
 					add(inventory, make_item(library.item_blueprints.reagent))
@ -37,15 +37,15 @@ function script_lenore(story_state)
 	elseif story_state.main == 4 or story_state.main == 5 or story_state.main == 6 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
 			{lenore_portrait, [[hey phoebe. any aches or pains?]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[i'm in tip-top shape!]]},
+			{ph_p, [[i'm in tip-top shape!]]},
 		}))
 	elseif story_state.main == 7 then
 		if story_state.branch_lenore == 1 then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{lenore_portrait, [[whoa, you can't just set off fireworks willy-nilly.]]},
-				{lenore_portrait, "get me 3 distilled water for cleaning bandages"},
+				{lenore_portrait, "get me 3 purified water for cleaning bandages"},
 				{lenore_portrait, "and 3 buckets of well water for fire."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[you got it!!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[you got it!!]]},
 			}))
 			story_state.branch_lenore = 2
 		elseif story_state.branch_lenore == 2 then
@ -69,6 +69,9 @@ function script_lenore(story_state)
 			end
 		elseif story_state.branch_lenore == 3 then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({{lenore_portrait, [[i'll meet you at the library for viewing when you're ready.]]}}))
+			if story_state.branch_hans == 3 and story_state.branch_lenore == 3 and story_state.branch_brigitte == 2 then
+				story_state.main = 8
+			end 
 		end -- lenore branch finished
 	elseif story_state.main == 8 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({{lenore_portrait, [[i'll see you at the library for viewing the festival!]]}}))
--- a/script_library.lua
+++ b/script_library.lua
@ -2,15 +2,15 @@ function script_library(s)
 	if s.main == 1 or s.main == 2 or s.main == 3 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
 			{librarian_portrait, [[hey phoebe. looking for any book in particular today?]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[just browsing!]]}
+			{ph_p, [[just browsing!]]}
 		}))
 	elseif s.main == 4 then
 		if not s.got_gunpowder_book then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{librarian_portrait, [[explosives, huh. well, this might help you out?]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[oh, a chemistry manual? hmm... black powder...]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[and i could... yes, i think i can use this to make gunpowder! maybe more!]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[thank you so much stef!!!]]}
+				{ph_p, [[oh, a chemistry manual? hmm... black powder...]]},
+				{ph_p, [[and i could... yes, i think i can use this to make gunpowder! maybe more!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[thank you so much stef!!!]]}
 			}))
 			add(grimoire, library.recipes.gunpowder)
 			add(grimoire, library.recipes.bomb)
@ -19,35 +19,35 @@ function script_library(s)
 		else
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{librarian_portrait, [[did that book help?]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[you betcha!]]}
+				{ph_p, [[you betcha!]]}
 			}))
 		end
 	elseif s.main == 5 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
 			{librarian_portrait, [[hey phoebe. looking for any book in particular today?]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[just browsing!]]}
+			{ph_p, [[just browsing!]]}
 		}))
 	elseif s.main == 6 then
 		if not s.got_crystal_book then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[stef! i need books about gems! how to make them!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[stef! i need books about gems! how to make them!]]},
 				{librarian_portrait, [[gems, huh? let me check...]]},
 				{librarian_portrait, [[here, does this help?]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[yes, this is perfect! let's see...]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "hmm..."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "hmm... \nhmm..."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "hmm... \nhmm... \nhmm..."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[okay so i need raw crystal, polishing powder, and reagent.]], function()
+				{ph_p, [[yes, this is perfect! let's see...]]},
+				{ph_p, "hmm..."},
+				{ph_p, "hmm... \nhmm..."},
+				{ph_p, "hmm... \nhmm... \nhmm..."},
+				{ph_p, [[okay so i need raw crystal, polishing powder, and reagent.]], function()
 					add(grimoire, library.recipes.polishing_powder)
 					add(grimoire, library.recipes.starshine_gem)
 					toast("received recipes!")
 				end},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "i can get crystal from the cliffs and sand from the beach!"},
+				{ph_p, "i can get crystal from the cliffs and sand from the beach!"},
 			}))
 			s.got_crystal_book = true
 		else
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{phoebe_portrait, "thanks for the book, stef!"},
+				{ph_p, "thanks for the book, stef!"},
 				{librarian_portrait, [[that's my job!]]},
 			}))
 		end
@ -60,20 +60,21 @@ function script_library(s)
 			{librarian_portrait, [[a fireworks festival after all, huh?]]},
 			{neighbor_portrait, [[i thought it was done for after the alchemist passed away, rest his soul.]]},
 			{seller_portrait, [[well it looks like phoebe took up the reins!]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[aw shucks!]]},
+			{ph_p, [[aw shucks!]]},
 			{lenore_portrait, [[thanks for making this happen, lil alchemist.]]},
 			{neighbor_portrait, [[thanks, phoebe!]]},
 			{seller_portrait, [[thanks, phoebe.]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[thank you all for helping so much. i couldn't have done it without you.]]},
+			{ph_p, [[thank you all for helping so much. i couldn't have done it without you.]]},
 		}, nil, {update=fireworks_update, draw=fireworks_draw}))
+		s.main = 9
 		screen_walkaround = {update=fireworks_update, draw=fireworks_draw}
 		screen_workbench = screen_conversation({
-				{phoebe_portrait, "thank you for completing atelier phoebe!"},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "this was a labor of love and bafflement."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "why did i make an atelier fangame in pico-8? i dunno."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "but i hope you enjoyed it! you can find me online as shoofle."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "lately i spend my time @shoofle\n@beach.city."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "gimme a shout if you enjoyed atelier phoebe!"},
+				{ph_p, "thank you for completing atelier phoebe!"},
+				{ph_p, "this was a labor of love and bafflement."},
+				{ph_p, "why did i make an atelier fangame in pico-8? i dunno."},
+				{ph_p, "but i hope you enjoyed it! you can find me online as shoofle."},
+				{ph_p, "lately i spend my time @shoofle\n@beach.city."},
+				{ph_p, "gimme a shout if you enjoyed atelier phoebe!"},
 			}, 
 			function() 
 				screen_workbench = {update=bench_update, draw=bench_draw} 
--- a/script_neighbor.lua
+++ b/script_neighbor.lua
@ -8,18 +8,18 @@ function script_neighbor(s)
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({{door_portrait, "[you hear the sound of groaning from inside.]"}}))
 		else
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[hello! i was asked to bring you a potion!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[hello! i was asked to bring you a potion!]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[that's so kind! i injured my back trying to get a rock out]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[of my field. this potion will fix me right up.]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, "i'm brigitte, by the way."},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[... hey, you're an alchemist, right?]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[of course!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[of course!]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[i've heard that alchemists can make explosives. a bomb could get rid of]]}, 
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[that boulder in my field. do you think you could bring me one?]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[my grandfather never taught me to make explosives,]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "because they're dangerous."},
+				{ph_p, [[my grandfather never taught me to make explosives,]]},
+				{ph_p, "because they're dangerous."},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[damn. maybe the witch knows how to make them? she knows all sorts of things.]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[i'll have to ask!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[i'll have to ask!]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[she lives in the tower southeast of town, i think!]]},
 			}))
 			del(inventory, potion)
@ -28,23 +28,23 @@ function script_neighbor(s)
 	elseif s.main == 3 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
 			{neighbor_portrait, [[did the witch give you the recipe?]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[not yet!]]}
+			{ph_p, [[not yet!]]}
 		}))
 	elseif s.main == 4 then
 		local bomb = player_has("bomb")
 		if bomb == nil then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[did the witch give you the recipe?]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[no and actually she was really rude about it!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[no and actually she was really rude about it!]]},
 			}))
 		else
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[this bomb should break up a rock! be very safe with it.]]},
+				{ph_p, [[this bomb should break up a rock! be very safe with it.]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[oh wow, thank you so much! i will be far away when it goes off.]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[so how did you convince the witch to give you the recipe?]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[i didn't! she was incredibly rude and basically told me to fuck off!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[i didn't! she was incredibly rude and basically told me to fuck off!]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[huh, i wonder what bee's in her bonnet.]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[she kept talking about how there's no great alchemy left in pilton.]]},
+				{ph_p, [[she kept talking about how there's no great alchemy left in pilton.]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[maybe she needs someone to impress her.]]}
 			}))
 			del(inventory, bomb)
@ -53,26 +53,29 @@ function script_neighbor(s)
 	elseif s.main == 5 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
 			{neighbor_portrait, [[that witch soften up yet?]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[grrrr!]]}
+			{ph_p, [[grrrr!]]}
 		}))
 	elseif s.main == 6 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
 			{neighbor_portrait, [[that bomb worked a treat on my boulder!]]},
-			{phoebe_portrait, [[hooray!]]}
+			{ph_p, [[hooray!]]}
 		}))
 	elseif s.main == 7 then
 		if s.branch_brigitte == 1 then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[the fireworks festival? on my farm? you betcha!]]},
 				{neighbor_portrait, [[since harvest is over it's totally free.]]},
-				{phoebe_portrait, [[yippee!]]},
+				{ph_p, [[yippee!]]},
 			}))
 			s.branch_brigitte = 2
 			if s.branch_brigitte == 2 and s.branch_lenore == 3 and s.branch_hans == 3 then
-				s.branch_main = 8
+				s.main = 8
 			end
 		elseif s.branch_brigitte == 2 then
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({{neighbor_portrait, [[meet up at the library for viewing, right?]]}}))
+			if s.branch_brigitte == 2 and s.branch_lenore == 3 and s.branch_hans == 3 then
+				s.main = 8
+			end
 		end
 	elseif s.main == 8 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({{neighbor_portrait, [[meetchya at the library for watching the fireworks!]]}}))
--- a/script_witch.lua
+++ b/script_witch.lua
@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ function script_witch(s)
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({{door_portrait, "[there is no answer to your knocking.]"}}))
 	elseif s.main == 3 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
-			{phoebe_portrait, "excuse me! i would like to know how to make explosives!"},
+			{ph_p, "excuse me! i would like to know how to make explosives!"},
 			{witch_portrait, [[this town is dead. i can make no explosions. the alchemy of pilton has died.]]},
 			{witch_portrait, [[try as you might, phoebe, you aren't your grandfather.]]},
 			{witch_portrait, [[this town is a husk of what it once was. ]]},
@ -13,23 +13,23 @@ function script_witch(s)
 				sfx(4)
 			end},
 			{door_portrait, "i have no time for this."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "... huh!"},
+			{ph_p, "... huh!"},
 		}))
 		s.main = 4
 	elseif s.main == 4 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({{door_portrait, "[there is no answer to your knocking.]"}}))
 	elseif s.main == 5 then
 		change_screen(screen_conversation({
-			{phoebe_portrait, "hey! witch!"},
+			{ph_p, "hey! witch!"},
 			{door_portrait, "my name is agnes."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "i figured out how to make gunpowder. suck on that."},
+			{ph_p, "i figured out how to make gunpowder. suck on that."},
 			{witch_portrait, "big whoop. you still know nothing."},
 			{witch_portrait, "no one in this town knows the art of alchemy."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "there's you! you know it!"},
+			{ph_p, "there's you! you know it!"},
 			{witch_portrait, "pah. no one of your generation knows the ways."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "well maybe if someone would teach us-"},
+			{ph_p, "well maybe if someone would teach us-"},
 			{witch_portrait, "maybe if you showed any promise i could teach you."},
-			{phoebe_portrait, "grrrr, you old hag!"},
+			{ph_p, "grrrr, you old hag!"},
 			{witch_portrait, "hm."},
 			{witch_portrait, "..."},
 			{witch_portrait, "bring me a starshine gem. it must carry the red and shiny traits."},
@ -57,10 +57,10 @@ time!
 			}))
 		else
 			change_screen(screen_conversation({
-				{witch_portrait, "hm. this is... passable. i will help you."},
+				{witch_portrait, "hm. this is... passable. i will help you. keep the gem."},
 				{witch_portrait, "my bones are too tired to keep up this fight."},
-				{witch_portrait, "i can teach you to make fireworks."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "fireworks! the festival?!"},
+				{witch_portrait, "i will teach you to make fireworks."},
+				{ph_p, "fireworks! the festival?!"},
 				{witch_portrait, "a festival is more than just a box of fireworks."},
 				{witch_portrait, "hm. this is a bad idea.", function() 
 					sfx(4) 
@ -68,18 +68,18 @@ time!
 					toast("received recipe!")
 				end},
 				{door_portrait, "hm. this is a bad idea."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "wow, she's so awful!"},
+				{ph_p, "wow, she's so awful!"},
 				{door_portrait, "i can hear you out there."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "keep it down, i'm thinking."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "a fireworks festival! that would be so incredible!"},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "but she's right. i'll have to call in favors."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "hans the charcoal seller used to run the show itself."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "i have to talk to lenore about safety."},
-				{phoebe_portrait, "and i should ask brigitte if we can use her farm!"},
+				{ph_p, "keep it down, i'm thinking."},
+				{ph_p, "a fireworks festival! that would be so incredible!"},
+				{ph_p, "but she's right. i'll have to call in favors."},
+				{ph_p, "hans the charcoal seller used to run the show itself."},
+				{ph_p, "i have to talk to lenore about safety."},
+				{ph_p, "and i should ask brigitte if we can use her farm!"},
 			}))
 			s.main = 7
 		end
 	elseif s.main == 8 or s.main == 9 then
-		change_screen(screen_conversation({witch_portrait, "thank you."}))
+		change_screen(screen_conversation({{witch_portrait, "thank you."}}))
 	end
 end
--- a/utils.lua
+++ b/utils.lua
@ -58,32 +58,29 @@ function player_has(requirement, count, traits)
    return nil
 end

-function make_item(blueprint)
-    --if blueprint.description == nil then
-    --    blueprint = library.item_blueprints[blueprint]
+function make_item(bp)
+    --if bp.description == nil then
+    --    bp = library.i_bps[bp]
    --end

-    item = deepcopy(blueprint)
+    local i = deepcopy(bp)

-    item.quality = flr(blueprint.quality_base + rnd(blueprint.quality_range))
-    if blueprint.tags then item.tags = deepcopy(blueprint.tags)
-    else item.tags = {} end
-    item.traits = {}
-    if rnd(100) < blueprint.trait_chance then
-        add(item.traits, rnd(blueprint.trait_pool))
+    i.quality = flr(bp.quality_base + rnd(bp.quality_range))
+    if bp.tags then i.tags = deepcopy(bp.tags)
+    else i.tags = {} end
+    i.traits = {}
+    if rnd(100) < bp.trait_chance then
+        add(i.traits, rnd(bp.trait_pool))
    end
-    if rnd(100) < blueprint.trait_chance then
-        local t = rnd(blueprint.trait_pool)
-        if not contains(item.traits, t) then add(item.traits, t) end
+    if rnd(100) < bp.trait_chance then
+        local t = rnd(bp.trait_pool)
+        if not contains(i.traits, t) then add(i.traits, t) end
    end
-    return item 
+    return i 
 end

 function at(trait, x,y)
-    if (x < 0) return false
-    if (x > trait[4]) return false
-    if (y < 0) return false
-    if (y > trait[4]) return false
+    if x < 0 or x >= trait[4] or y < 0 or y >= trait[5] then return false end
    return mget(trait[2]+x, trait[3]+y) ~= 0
 end

@ -108,34 +105,32 @@ end

 function change_screen(new_screen)
    prev_screen = current_screen
-    if new_screen.before ~= nil then
-        new_screen.before()
-    end
+    if new_screen.before ~= nil then new_screen.before() end
    current_screen = new_screen
 end

 -- add newlines to a string to fit it into lines.
 function wrap(str, line_length)
    -- thanks to https://stackoverflow.com/questions/17586/best-word-wrap-algorithm, i did not feel like thinking this out myself
-    words = split(str, " ", false)
-    output = ""
+    local words = split(str, " ", false)
+    local output = ""

-    local current_line_length = 0
+    local c = 0
    for w in all(words) do
        while sub(w, 1, 1) == "\n" do
            output = output .. "\n"
-            current_line_length = 0
+            c = 0
            w = sub(w, 2)
        end
-        if current_line_length + #w > line_length then
-            if current_line_length > 0 then
+        if c + #w > line_length then
+            if c > 0 then
                output = output .. "\n"
-                current_line_length = 0
+                c = 0
            end
        end

        output = output .. w .. " "
-        current_line_length += #w + 1
+        c += #w + 1
    end
    return output
 end